After taking my 100 photos of different locks i thought it was interesting that there's something behind every lock. I definitely didnt want my book to turn into a catalogue of locks. I came up with the idea of having nets that the reader could build to keep their belongings in. That way their things are safe like the things behind the locks i took pictures of. 

When my book was critted in class the main problem was the link between the nets and the locks. Admittedly the connection wasn't very clear and unless i have some sort of introduction to the book it wouldn't become clear. 

The other issue is keeping the reader interested in the book, the first and last page are still a net with locks on them there's no narration or direction throughout the book.